so since karbn said most of what i think about it i'll point out some little stuff that annoyed me.
first clip: i see what you are going for there but it just doesn't work bc the player's moves are too sharp and he stopped for some time to turn and take the aim. it may be just me but it just looked awkward. (the other clips work well tho).

first cinematic: at the end of the death cinematic when zooming out i wonder why did you do that screen bump and switch straight to the next clip. it look out of place.
for what comes to mind now i think you could have zoomed in more before the zoom out and then do a sharp raise in the zoom out (i hope you get what i mean) and leave the clip for longer so it doesn't look awkward. or if you want it as a transition sync it perfectly and in this case the next clip should have some zoom out.

the transition at around 0:09 : the clip change at the same frame the beat happen, not before and not after.

that being said i think this is a step up from the last one, i'd suggest that you try to analyze t3c edits so you can get a better understanding of how things are done and if it seems complicated just slow down the vid as much as possible (the slower you watch it the easier it is to understand)