Originally Posted by Draigoon12

I can tell you're getting better.
Movement is not as stiff as it used to be, but you were a little slow in this replay, i'm happy to see that you're indeed improving.

So first off, opener was pretty generic but i dig with those kind of shit, and your opener was actually well executed and it was solid. The lumbar movement throws me off though because it looks a little choppy but thats just me nit picking so don't mind it. You could've made or gone for a better position after the opener, like go in a vertical standing wise position and continue the spin, and not go for the weird horizontal that forced you to kick Uke and it kinda ruined your momentum, i don't know if it was forced or not but try and not break your momentum, knee kick was decent, but that pec kick looked weak. The way you land at 340-330 was poorly done, and you could've used your right leg to launch and execute a better spin if you were to land flat footed or maybe extend your glute a little, the dms after this felt a little forced ngl, i didn't like how you suddenly contracted your knee after the first kick.

Replay is decent, atleast the movements is getting better and better, its not as stiff as it used to be and it is less choppy.

keep it up!

Originally Posted by T0n0mi

edited for u, so there is an example in pause and stuff
pause just kills momentum you have, and it's much harder to do things
let's consider we did a collab idk will u like the replay or not
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btw i tried to copy your movement style, ye