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overall the replay keeps really nice pace and everything. just at times there's wasted potential and it makes some stuff look awkward. also there's some instances where your lumbar bends oddly and it looks pretty bad. It's kind of nitpicking but it still shows quite a bit. For example at the start in the opener your lumbar bends right pretty hard for pretty long. i like the step you take into the cheat setup, its quite dynamic. however the cheat setup itself was pretty off axis and your arms weren't in sync with the rest of your body the whole time. you don't use your neck, which i feel can really add to a replay. the trick you do out of the landing however, is my favourite in the whole replay. the whole thing is in sync, aesthetically pleasing, and well spun. the trick out of that though is a bit odd because of how bent your knee is and that its a toe punt. bkick is a bit low but looks nice. the scoot and the swing through are kind of odd though as your abs stay extended most of the time and your planted leg is pretty bent, as well as you being bent pretty hard to the left. also, your chest rotates too soon in the swing through. overall, most of the criticism i have is pretty minor and stylistic i guess. you've been around for a long time and you already have one so don't take this too seriously. one tip i can give though is that keeping your lumbar straight and your knees more extended than contracted usually makes stuff look cleaner. hope this sates your need for cnc.