Soooo, you ahve kinda good dms, but still they are between random and something good, i cant normaly cnc the -9.30 replays, cuz really bad at it, but your moves looks 5/10, moments when u get intercia is really good, but some places looks weird for example you like get wrists in relax and they move like a baloon man, that not good, allways make your head and wrist hold and looking straight, that make your replay look more better.
And There is 1 thing with 9.30 replays and poses, they are really hard to look good, cuz any your movement make tori disbalanced, so just search the movement for pose. I edited this replays for you.
"sry for bad language"