I actually like how these look, especially street rat. The destruction looks real nice. From here I'd just say play with some new concepts and ideas, go in with a cool plan of what you want to do rather than just doing the dm thingy. That being said, you do the dm thingy well.

Also I'd say that the movement and pacing in How do you dance looks far less thoughtful and pleasing, I think it's just the inconsistency and how underwhelming a lot of it is, especially when you compare it to the other one.