pretty cool, i certainly think this is a much better direction for the replay, the original version looked like a lenshu replay at times with the way that you would just launch at uke and kick something without much refinement or reason. the arms during the opener show some twitching and I can't lie but the whole grab switching section just looks like it was an excuse to do something else because the manip was too difficult to continue there. the thing you do at around 960 to get the lift is a cool idea but I feel it could be refined to be cleaner as it looks like you really struggled with lifting the weight of uke, the arm movement once again shows ups and downs in quality until the end of the wip where you find your flow again
you show really strong glimpses of nice movement between sections of either not moving or general indecisiveness I think if you could maintain that flow throughout the entire replay you could make some really spectacular replays
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also hey that parkour replay was looking pretty cool, at around 4240 you could probably do a little more to make it look less stiff but overall I think the replay is looking pretty cool
Last edited by tabby; Aug 10, 2023 at 12:53 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump