HEAR ME OUT, mute the audio on your video, play this and your video at the same time -> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_ofiX4tuLQ
The story telling, the building of the hype, the slowmos. It fits the editing style you're using and everything else much better, I know it sounds generic af and you might be going for something else.

But the way the video is structured and based on vibes, I think it fits much better the music I suggested (great camera work btw!) and story telling enhanced that way.