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Hello cool replays =^.^= my personal favourite was orange heel banana peel actually. As far as for why I actually like it, I felt as though the replay flowed a lot better, movement seemed overall a lot more polished, and the hits were quite unconventional. The neck movement is pretty cool too ahah

As far as cnc goes:

Both replays show that you obviously know how to move your tori, I think the largest point of contention in the replays is general decision making. You work well with what you end up with, you clearly know how to improvise, but the replays do suffer from early decisions that compromise the replays. I suppose it's just a matter of "play more and you'll get it", but I can try to highlight the major decisions I thought caused you problems

In orange heel banana peel, the first two contacts with uke only negatively impacted your own movement and also pushed him a way a bit, so really you were better off removing them. You should've grinded for the double knee here because the grab switch into the second knee DM was forced, there is pretty much no other good option there. The way you dual grab and throw him is some Swexx shit it looks really sick, though if you threw him more horizontally it would look even cooler. The move would be allowed to breathe more, because in this case you immediately had to chase hard and the first striking opportunity after the grab was also forced which ended the replay. I can see that you wanted to grab his torso right after for further destruction but the kick pushed him out of range.The hit iself is good though! The DMs are solid, I just feel as though better decision-making was in order here. Cute skeets!

I think the second replay is probably one you'd be more proud of and I can see why, the torso manip is cool and the hit is quite satisfying, the way you lift him initially is pretty cool. Up until 850 ish, the replay is totally fine. While I can see why you went for the punch, it removed the entire lower body of uke from the rest of the replay in this circumstance. It's a good setup, so you should've at least gone for a boomit punch on the groin if you were content with losing his lower half. There are a lot of general hitches in the movement during the torso manip, I think you might be formbotting a bit lmao. The utilization of your pecs mainly could be a ton cleaner here, if you stare at them you'll see what I mean, it kinda looks like you're being jolted by a defibrillator throughout. The launch into the hit you should be very proud of! It's sick, and with a little bit of editing I managed to ge the wrist DM and the pec DM so it's clearly a great setup too

I think the replays are pretty good though, they are quite impressive as far as an early forte into ukebashing goes. The main takeaway is just to pay attention to what you're losing when you go with a certain idea, and if it is worth it. In most cases here you lost a lot of joints that could've been dismembered in later parts of a replay

make moar (✿◠‿◠)

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