Hi RA I was wondering if anyone could help me out with this simple opener I am working on. I like to keep my openers simple, with as few joint manips as I can, but this one needs some work. It gets good speed, and I like the style to it, but ingame it hasnt proven very effective aside from what I do to follow it up, the initial hit never connects.

Anyways, I would like to make it a big punch, but Im open to anything.
Here are two variations.
Thanks,
Deady.