well the title says it all, can you tell me if this is an ok replay, and if not teach me how to fix it, critisizim is welcomed, but please, try to spare my feelings. LOL wtf feelings...if you could edit it that would be nice too.

http://forum.toribash.com/replay.php?download=2273

thanks!

I just made a suicide move tell me if its ok.. what should i fix other than the fact that i could rip some more of my limbs off....
http://forum.toribash.com/replay.php?download=2281