Sorry college this past week has been kinda hectic.

A few things:
• The face as a whole needs to be a little smaller, I don't want to see my teeth from the back of my head, and my eyes are a little too big as well.
• The center of the teeth and between the eyes should be lined up.
• Not sure what I want with the chin, I want it to be a little more defined, maybe have the neck joint look like it goes into the hole in the underside of the jaw bone and have black between it and the chin.
• Less teeth cracks, not lighter =P
• I kinda like it better without the nose, could you make it look less like there used to be a nose there.
• not a big deal but I thought the part that I have circled on the left of the back, looks a little weird.


Thanks Membrain, your doing great.


Thrah, too much outline.

Hucota7, if you'd like to keep trying make it a little darker and turn that frown upside-down =D