Yeah, i apologize for the tag, but i didn't see any rules regarding litterature tags. I won't go as far as calling my writing an art, and i believe that the [ART] tag is misleading. There is no visual art here, just writing.

ANYWAYS, the story itself. It's a sci-fi story, set on a different planet in the far future. A veeeeeeeeeeeery short summary:
We follow a commando of the Interstellar Federation, Ogar (who is an ogre), on his mission to kill the evil pirate overlord, Sxalmok (alien humanoid insect). Ogar's brother, Thudd (who is also an ogre), is also on the mission. During the mission, there are many surprises for the duo, though they also dole out some surprising themselves. How will it go? Read the story to find out! (hee hee.)

Part 1
DeviantArt: http://shook12.deviantart.com/#/d38t4d7
PDF version: http://www.box.net/shared/snaz5t3x5a

Part 2
DeviantArt: http://shook12.deviantart.com/#/d38z5aw
PDF version: http://www.box.net/shared/nnrg5e03ug

I know it's quite long, and believe me, you haven't seen half of it yet. Very literally. This is the first half of the first day, and there will be at least three days, if i ever get around to it. And no, the amount of cursing isn't going to decrease.

Soooo... Enjoy? And do tell me what you think. I quite like how it turned out myself, though that goes without saying.