Yeah, i know the soviet russia thing is a bit iffy (due to a lack of background knowledge in that snip), but it makes more sense when you know that both protagonists originally come from Earth. It's merely a prod at the persistence of silly jokes in this world, but yeah, i see what you mean. I intend to stick with my slightly silly/naive style of writing though, because that's how i always write stories, if at all possible. A personal touch, if you prefer. But thanks for the honesty! I'll have a PDF up soon, if anyone's interested.

Edit: Right, PDF is up. Grab it here:

http://www.box.net/shared/snaz5t3x5a

If you're interested. As Bojan mentioned, it's pretty light reading (barring my occasional use of long words), so don't expect a massively deep plot and extensive mindfuck. That isn't to say it's a childs goodnight-story (more like late teen because its written after midnight exclusively herp durf), but yeah, it's written by an 18 year old student with an overactive imagination. You have been warned.