Downloaded it, Read it...

They kinda invincible are they? I thought you would kill one brother in first part and make other a revenging beast but I guess then we wouldn't have their constant ''we kill this and smile'' talk. Will u introduce new character for the duo to quarrel with? Maybe female one, some witty bounty hunter that needs Sxalmok as bad as they do but alive. Good to have these ''drama'' situations. Just to brake ''Yippee ki-yay motherfuckers'' cartoon. I know they Ogres but even Ogres have some kind of feelings. Cardboard characters are no fun.
Sxalmok - regular evil mastermind, I hope u will ''spice'' him up a bit. Without great villain no great fun.

Waiting chapter 2.

And don't discourage on me cause I'm all ''serious''. I have read it and I'm waiting for more, so it got appeal. I just want more... More ''turmoils''

Also, you're writing in first person. :} you ogre :}