its good but the tori is grainy
Make the lighting brighter or delute the sun/weirdassbrightthing.
in some places i can see the cut out parts fix that.
what the hell is that weird dark thing? a penis? lol
its on the north-west side of the lighting "W"
Make the shading more accurate. (weres the light coming from) (The side that has the light will be most light other side is the opposite.) Get Great.