Im quite curious why does everyone seems not to read ''describe your hobbies, don't list them'', thought this is the minor problem, i mean, you could omit that 'you like having tc XD'. Try improving your grammar. The 'why should i care' question is one of the most important ones in my opinion, and saying that we should care cuz you like doing headpass and parkour is not the best answer.
Notes: What do you mean by 'NOP'?
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