I never came by this replay thread but I think I might more often in the future.

First of all, I love your style overall.
I love that style that goes between the fluid and the stiff.
The opener was great, I loved it, specially the corkscrew.
The first DM was a little bit stiff but I still liked it.
The spinning before the chest DMs looked cool, but I don't like grab DMs that much.
The kick could have been bigger, but looked ok.
Also no pose

7/10, would be higher if you corrected some of the mistakes.