Crunchy Toast - opener looks very, very good. liquid and even realistic but littlebit too stiff. Firs boom, amazing very like when replay start with big bood like you do it here. but i think if will you spent some more time with this replay you will get even bigger boom. I didn't really like this decap but second kick and this 2dm's looks not that bad. but i think its can be bigger. at least 3dms. I like this idea with manipulation with uke's middle :P but this grab just ruined everything. also this last back kick looks very wrong and you got only 2dms. Pose looks very nice. 8.5/10
I also saw your WIP its very nice, cant waait to sawe final one.