The slow-Motion and mod was good, but in beginning you were stiff, music didn't blend in, not the best I've seen of videos.
Also try and make it 50 seconds and over, the 15 second shit is annoying when you see 15 second videos on every thread.

But, the lighting and flow was nice after the beginning, and I gotta give you a thumbs up for that.

6/10

Good starting of an awesome video soon.