Trying to go into the music making business. First song of my first album, War One. This song is free. So if you liked it, pm me and I'll send you the MP3.
I'm looking for many tips for improvement.

NOTE: Don't just rate it. I'm tired of getting crappy replies with just a rating. I want tips and, if possible, ideas. I'm not a remix artist, but I could give it a try. Eventually.

Programs used: Dubstep Studio (Find it yourself)
FL studio (Barely used it for this song)