Papua: The opener was ok, and the first kick was very nice. When going for back kicks, it's usually better to extend ankle, atleast for me.
Really liked the next hit, it was different.
The next kick was bad, because you didn't kick with your foot, and you were floaty before it.
The decap wasn't very good either, very messy.
Found the pose stiff, I usually prefer relaxed poses.

Imo, you overuse relax.
6.7/10

Also, first try at self spar, please comment.