I know harsh CnC when I see it. That's harsh. Trololol.

Anyways,
Gotkicks - Your opener was good, but then you made your right arm strangely stiff for a moment. I liked that side flip kick you did after. However, your landing was a bit awkward. After that, you attempted a turn around, which was successful, but I disliked how you spun around on your toes. THAT SHIT WOULD HURT IRL. The kick after looked pretty straight forward, it flowed nicely. After he lifted you, I loved that roll. It was smooth and realistic. Sadly, you brought yourself a bit too far away from him. You should try to maintain a good, certain distance. Not too close, not too far. Then, you did a nice recovery after the roll, but suddenly did a "side-to-side" run which looked quite awkward. That kick looked pretty smooth, but your right arm was ghosting through your right thigh for a while. Try to avoid ghosting through any body parts at all times. Nothing special for the next 200 frames. After he kicked your head, your reaction took quite a long time to notice. (You fell down about 50 frames after the knock out) Once you "died," the way you laid on the ground looked very strange. AND ANOTHER GHOSTING DOHOHOH. Overall, I'd say you did a good job. You maintained a good flow, kept your balance quite nicely, and your movements were smooth.


Ibd1jr (Dafuq Name) - He took one step which didn't bring him forward at all, lifted the other leg, and then extended his knee before the second lifted leg could even touch the ground. AWKWARD LOLWTF. He ghosted through his leg as well. After his "jump" he landed in an awkward position and lost control of his balance. He then did a strange looking "donkey kick." His right leg flinches when he tried to turn around from contracting and extending it. He flows in a nice kick, but, again, falls into an awkward position and loses his balance. During his "lift-up" kick, both of his legs looked very stiff. He then suddenly stops which has killed all of his flow. TROLOL MORE GHOSTING. He looked as if he had a good, maintained run, but he contracts both knees and loses his balance. I liked how he flowed into another kick, though. I disliked the last kicks he threw out because he sacrificed his balance and his flow to throw two strange looking kicks. He also used his arms to lift himself up which is quite unrealistic in his position. The rest of the spar was just unnecessary. His pose was also quite strange.

Phew, okay. Here's a very good spar Alai and I have recently done.