So looking at Uke alone, I have to say that his movement was somewhat awkward
Except for the kick. Your tori's first punch awkward, didn't look right.
That K.O. didn't look right either, though it was rather stylish had it been a kick to the FACE, not the arm. The K.O. was also too slow.

Uploaded other shitty half of my selfspar, I don't really like it but whatever.
I had made a shittier version before, so I decided to atleast make it less twitchy.
bugs the hell out of me that I can't do better.