The only thing wrong with it atm is that it is all out of proportion for a head texture, I know that, everything will be set and proportioned properly when I get around to it.
I also know that the mouth is really wobbly and bumpy [the outlines of the mouth] should I keep this or make it straighter?

To do these I drew them first and then scanned them into my computer and went over them.

C+C would be lovely!