Hours: Goddamot stop filling me with that slenderman bullshit or I won't sleep tonight D:
Shock: You need to wait a little bit before the steps so your whole foot touches the ground, and when it does, don't go for the next step right away, wait until you are sure that the next foot is gonna land perfectly without needing any tweaks, which usually look akward.

I'm gonna give another shot at rendering the video, I'll try a completely different format this time, since AVI works, but the quality is ass.