This has quite a lot of potential.

The main area I would suggest fixing is the landing after the fulltwist (Or whatever the spinny thing is, I forget), but in order to fix the landing, you might need to land with your knees slightly contracted, but with your feet on the floor to create extra upward momentum, thus making the landing of the fulltwist easier (Well, it should do)


The fulltwist itself is great, so just try and replicate it as best as possible.

Oh, and you have a few issues with flow here and there, but you should get better in time.

One more thing... If you find my criticism kind of odd to understand, it's my fault. I can't explain things well, but pm me if you want to ask any questions about the criticism and/or if you want me to look at an edit of the replay or something (Or just ask someone who understands more about tricking than me, because I don't really do much of that kind of thing on this game).