Both replays (Shotgun with... and Cross shave) shows that you know how to move your body.
Tho:
1) I cant find a nice fl0w in either of them
2) Yay, lets all just play with the fact that joints can pass through each other (second replay)
3) I must say that you are way to stiff to make the replays look appealing in any way.
I believe the worst critics are those not concise, and not the ones being a bit to hard on you.