I liked it. Coming from a person that hates overedits.

I loved what you did at 0:26, it looked very neat.
Overall, it was a pretty nice video, enjoyable to watch, but I personally prefer longer videos.

At the starting spar, I see you had to put those white thingies (excuse me, I'm not familiarized with that kind of effects) at the left and right of the toris because that part would otherwise feel a bit bland, but I'm sure you could have thought of something better, it seems that you just put it there to fill up.