The free camming was just as sly said wierd and zoomed in, sync was off at most parts and outro was bad.
When I watch the video I feel that there's so many places to sync the booms and dms and what not. but you dont use them. What I am trying to say is that I know from your other videos that you know how to sync but it seems like you choose not to?
I like that you're not over editing it with rainbows everywhere etc. I like simplicity. and you do not suck at intros at all, I enjoyed the intro.
Reading this all back it makes me seem like a depressed harsch idiot and I'm sorry if that's the case but I really think that if you would have spent more time making the video you would have gotten an amazing video instead of an average good video.
Waiting for your future work, I think you'll be making some kewl stuff.