Evening, time for some serious CnC \/
The start of the... let's call it a manipulation could have led to something really cool.
The first kick was ok, although try to aim for somewhere with more joints for example the chest or groin in order to get more dismemberments with your kick.
From then I see what you were trying to do, come round for a second kick.
While the idea was nice, it could have been achieved by relaxing more of your joints.

Also using the same grab (or even using lots of grab in a replay) is often considered bad in replay making.
It can make the replay look a tad sloppy.

Having said all that, keep up the hard work and keep trying with more replays and you'll get the hang of it, and improve with every replay.

Good job, and as i said, keep it up.

(This should be what you write about replays, not just "cool replay 10/10" or something)