One week without posts? Damn.
The running at the beginning was decent, no problems about that one. But the first hit you did to uke was... unpleasant to look at, it was messy and it looked like a reverse belly flop to the face. The fighting part after the first hits was rather unrealistic, at least you managed to balance right. The elbow to the face after those stuff was not as solid as you made your tori act, it looked more like uke accidentally brushed his elbow to your tori. The punching at the end was a good idea but the execution was awful, you should contract the elbows a little earlier, like the one you did at the first punch and probably a little closer too.