Alrighty.

The opener is a bit generic and the twist that follows could have been waaaay
better, but the twist that comes after that looks rather coo. I feel that
you had your arms at your sides through everything up until the punch though.
speaking of the punch it looks pretty cool, and the kick combo looked nice
as well, it's a shame that the kick itself didn't connect well because of your
opponents positioning and weird block. that bit where you stand up looks
awful, and the pause was.. iunno, it shouldn't have been there. You could
have made that kick, I don't know why you decided to hold the knee.
the recovery after was bad.
the pose was a pose.



latest and not greatest.
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first warning, Velair.