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Ok, here it goes.
Madwheel: I normally don't care that much about openers, since they are very subjective, but this time it looks like you got a little short with this one, you were trying to do a fast spin into a set up but you rotate chest and pecs to soon, that's why you had to rotate and extend legs, elbows in order to keep that momentum which was lost for 30 frames, making you look very stiff. You could have waited in order to get a fluid rotation or, use your right arm to get that full rotation with much more speed. Now this could be intentional, maybe you didn't want to use that arm because it seems like a very common move, even so the result looked forced. After that you solved the situation with a quick flashy move, the grab was well used there so good job. The only thing here and this is just me, is that I don't like when peps grab long before the hand makes contact, you did it 10 frames before hitting the knee. I'm not saying you did bad or that it's a bad thing, it's just a visual detail. One frame before contact it's my rule with grabs.
The boom was good, the kick had (50) speed and even though when it ghosted the head it went down to (30) you still got a 4dm so well done. This time you did used your arm to get that second kick which was very weak and instead of contracting your right hip all the way for all that time you could extend it the moment it got fully contracted to get a scissor kick, that way you could have done more damage and at the same time avoid that weird jump you did to get on your feet.
Visual details: This is also subjective but any ways...
- The relaxed head all the time (neck).
- Sudden extended joints. (some times its better to extend for a few frames then lax)
- Grabbing long before contact.
- Extra frames of nothing showing that your pose it's not balanced. (1000 frames)
- Stiffness (mostly elbows in your case)
Overall it was a good replay, had some good moments but that's it. Nothing special.
You have become much better since last time I saw your replays. Like you should know, you are growing. Keep that motivation, don't stop practicing.
I apologize for my bad English.
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