Berc: The face looks fine, maybe add the slight facial hair. I'm not sure what it is about the lips, eh. I don't like the hair though. Look at the reference, and bring the front up more, then have it flow past the cheek and downwards. The hair's also streaky brown.

Dengue: =[ Was looking forward to it. Oh well. Thanks anyway (I could wait if it's time you're worried about.)