Originally Posted by keoni109

Great. One thing, add a proper introduction. I can see what you're trying to do, you're trying to emotionally attach us with the video with that music. You know what would really help? Landscape shots, closeups, anything to change up the subject. One thing i would advise, is not to start any video off with replays, unless its a player showcase. Before you show any replays, you should include some video shots of a tori sitting on a box, or a closeup of the tori's face. Small things like these will make your video go a long way. If you look at videos like taylor swift's music video, you will see she takes up an entire 3 minutes just to establish the mood, then to go into the music. Its a magical moment when a video artist like yourself can do these sort of things.