Everybody seems to have this mindset that the first thing you should do on Uke is to boom the chest, and then do something to the glutes. Uke has other joints, you know.

So, manip was good, but fucking hell you slammed your head on Uke a whole lot. It's hard in -30, but if you already know it's going to look bad then don't do it unless the rest really makes up for it.
And in this case, it really didn't. I already said that the chest boomhit was very generic, and the ass kick wasn't solid and was unnecessarily messy. Seems like you worked on the manip and then you just wanted to do whatever to finish the replay. Don't do that, if you can't find inspiration then wait a day and it will be there the next day.