Ok Try to work over the angles of the camera and try to standardize the effects.
This negative effect was not very suitable for this video. Maybe you should have used in some part, but not all of it. I think the main fact was this. You did not capture the emotion and action of each replay, and some of the replays are well noobs. Even being a video facing the clan, try filtering the replays. Another fact was also music. Before you open your editor to make the video. Whatever it is. Look for a song that inspires you to make such thing.