So I've been messing around with SP for a little while, and I've decided that now's as good a time as any to start a replay thread

Well my replays aren't great or anything, but I'm posting these replays to make sure I'm going in the right direction. So, uh, you'd really be helping me out if you picked my replays apart and gave me a good idea of what you felt was wrong with them.

Anyways, here the first ones are.