Opener was meh. I'd want the left pec contracted when you kick and a bit before.
You should've kicked with your foot and not your shin imo.
All those head touches made me cry a bit inside.
You make a new launch just the same as the opener into a decent kick that was poorly aimed.

Those launches look boring and uncreative.
Looked like you needed to poop when you posed.

The replay itself is not bad but I keep trying to find something that I honestly like about it and it's hard.