Originally Posted by Humper

Try to avoid having the camera go through the tori's body.

Also, you messed up the transition at 32 seconds.

Originally Posted by Muun

Too much slowmotion for me, and again same shader ;_;

Change shader next time ?
Other than that is good so 8/10

Originally Posted by Tetsuru

You use the same boring shader in all of your videos.
Have some variation.

Originally Posted by Yoki

I agree with Tet and Muun, you should try using other shaders.
I found that the music was okay, seemed to fit the vid decently.
Didn't really like the transition into the tori much imo.
Other than that it was pretty decent. 7/10 I suppose

Originally Posted by Tyzi

i think you're all annoying



sly uses the same color scheme with every single video and its ok with you then
shader --> inverted.inc
don't like the music, don't like the pace