Everything I wanted to say has been already been said in the 3 comments before me. So I'm just gunna add-lib.

The music didn't really fit with the vid, in my opinion. Felt awfully close to the sort of music new video makers use (you know, the music that shouldn't be in a toribash video). I remember when I wanted the song "hoodie ninja" for my video and Humper made it. I regret that song choice to this day.

Don't think of music as just something to spice the video up, think of it as the final piece for a marvelous creation, or something.

4/10, I've seen better from you. You're on this weird roller-coaster, friend...