Those first two kicks were sublime. The wrist dm was entirely unnecessary and you could've made the replay much smoother without it. The little knee dm was cute as fuck though. I see that you went to get a flawless replay, but doing so got in the way of making it look good, especially at your knee at ~820. It makes your hits look weak. The fucking club dm in the air is ridiculous, I don't even know if I've seen something like that before, kudos for making that work. Pose was shit though.

Overall I'd say it would be good if you just didn't care about it being flawless and cared about it being good.