Originally Posted by
GuyX
I have a few concerns. First the face looks a bit too wide to me, but the design looks like it might be able to pull it off...eh. The eye patch string will not be able to connect. You might want to look into that. And lastly,something a lot of people tend to overlook; you cannot flip/past the mouth. It takes away to many points. Just my thoughts.
Personally,I won't be able to rate your work till I see what you decide to do from here. 
I try to make another mouth, I'm not good drawing mouth but I'll try something.
About the eye patch string, I'll fix it now.
And I don't understood what you said about the face. If you can show me in the text what you think is wide will be very helpfull.
Thank you for the construtive comment.