i like the opener and the lift you got on uke looks supercool
when you start to run you loose control and become forced to ruin your flow to regain control and balance
i would've tried fixing that step to be more controllable etc

i like the launch and butt dm's, shame you didn't get that groins
god i love groin dms

i really like your flow from the first arm dm until the grab to boom the torso
but the grab itself sort of ruined the nice flow you had going on there imo

i like the pose, you look a bit gay and i like it