You still need a lot more work on your texts, either have them faded in or edited in the video in some creative way rather than just popping it on the screen and having it be removed instantly.

The green / dark green / brown shaders are really ugly, the 1 at the end of the 1st replay was pretty nice though, you should continue working with those types imo.
And the evo transition page is not subtle at all and doesn't look too great, try make it more smoother and less bland or just spice it up just a tiny bit. Try and blend it in with the video (if that makes sense).

Seems like an oldschool video though, and since poop is oldschool I'm not sure if you were heading that way or accidentally made it look all old, so props if you meant that ;p