Dark: You kicked the ground on the frist trick, after that the jump into the splitkick looks really good because you don't have to kick the ground to get into the air.
Maybe relax elbows a little when you're raising those shoulders. Makes it look less stiff.
After the split the replay looks a little too grabby and messy. Pretty nice transition to the pose.

Pwnza: Definitely practice your balance, learn how to anticipate that you will start falling and have to save yourself with arms(looks bad). Remember, the more you use relax and hold the more real it will look.

Made some tricking too xD (pls nevermind the ending)