Alright, the opener was awkward imo but would have worked if you picked up a bit more speed. The back kick would have been much much much better if you did not stall for that moment to align it, following through with speed would have made it much sexier. The punch was at an awkward position that did not even up flowing that well. And the punch grab (at least in my opinion) is a nono. You exert way too much force to grab with no immediate results. The following kick was okay, could have been stronger but no major complaints. The replay should have ended there, the backwards shuffle to split the glutes looked really strange and just was not necessary. You don't NEED to get all of the dismemberment's you can, just make sure it flows well (or meets your own expectations i guess). Try working on control over what is relaxed and what is held so it doesn't look like madness. Watch what hits you and when you ghost through your body. So far so good, just keep working at it .