The opener was a bit too stiff. I understand that seeking the arm position you used at first is fairly common, but since it comprises many joints on hold you need to balance it out nicely to prevent looking that stiff.

It also wasted a bit of the momentum it could have had. With your leg lifted and your body starting to fall, it is advised that you make use of that falling momentum, transfer it sideways and then finally upwards in a continuous movement. So if you put your leg down, and then up again to adjust its position, you will be killing the initial downwards force that you created, plus it breaks the flow that the move could have had.

About the btwist. With a single rotation landing with the aid of your hand isn't that good of a choice because it'll look like you struggled with something easy. I understand that it was a great help generate speed for the following move, but you could have used your pecs in a better way during the btwist to get the extra rotation that would have mitigated the need for you to use that hand there.

Then the transition to the cork was lovely. My favorite part of the replay.

The cork itself looked very nice mid-air but you still struggled with the landing. On some cases it's better if you choose to land on one leg to achieve a straighter torso by counter balancing with having the opposite hip extended. Opt out of double feet landings that make your head almost hit the floor.