Do you see how you lost speed with your left leg during the opening run?

First jump wasn't a jump, you were not prepared for it at all, you simply fell forward then used your arms to pull yourself to that side. Next time prepare for a jump atleast 1-2 steps before.

Recovery was bad and twitchy, you want to recover by getting into a bowing position.

Next time jump was noobish, anyone could fall forward then extend their knee.

If you want realism, that cartwheel should not be there. It was too stiff anyways and looks like you were too lazy to put effort into that part.

Your preparing for the next jump was very twitchy, what's witht he sudden arm extension then contract then extend again? The jump was a bit better this time.

The run was OK. jump n roll not bad, i think the best [art of the replay is the ending.

Anyways it seems like you were lazy and didn't put much effort into this replay, you can do better ;) If something looks weird, do not continue until you fix that part.