Opener was okay, I assume you were bored and just screwing around
Twist after that was nice and fast, and the back kick was gg
Manip stuff were good
Don't like how you started grabbing so early and when you grabbed you killed your momentum. Also I wish you had tried to make it flawless
First kick was good, considering you had to make it in such an awkward position
Second kick was okay
I feel you could have turned the last hit into a boom, but it's cool as it is
Don't like how you twitched before DMing yourself